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There She Lay’s The Art of Noise

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There She Lay's The Art of Noise
By: J. Clark



There she lay’s beautiful and angelic and the art to my profound soul.
She lay there before me modeling the floor.
My heart rains down the storm of being completely captured with her ripping away my composure,
she lays there in the most breath taking way relaxing a pose on her shoulders.
The sexiness of her lips pressed firmly against mine.
Her soul of art has captured me, I have lost the pattern of my time.
I am robbing the world with the intent of her in my mind.
The way she possesses art she should be locked away in the lost of towers,
the art of noise washes my soul in different complete showers.
I release a melody with rays of her different powers.
I am weak willed for her and the most sad coward.
Peach trees are sadden by my drive and my lack of motives,
I need her help now to simply control it.
The arch in her back is so unique and perfectly molded.
My emotions of my love is being released and the written papers of love has told on me.
She is the art of love can’t you see. My fingers start to stroke the strings of my violin,
There she lays her beautiful physique , my soul is corrupted by her in violence.
Silence, so I can remain the.
Special love she always wanted in me.
There she lays,
The art of my noise,
Her melody isn’t profound.
Not even in chorus.


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© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

Author notes

This is a art piece that I love and she is so beautiful there modeling in nude to where she is the art of noise. I like it you don't have to I wouldn't care. ~ Lady Enthralling ~

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This is one of my many art inspired writes. If you have a eye for art the way I do then you can grasp the essence of such a lovely write

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  • dillpickle62
    June 21

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    I agree and...

    perfectly written I may add. I enjoyed this poem with a touch of class. Explaining art this way a photograph for the mind.
    Excellent !


  • Expat4Cebu
    June 5
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    Very hot

    Now, excuse me . . . I'm off to take a cold shower.

  • kennethlaney
    February 5
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    Good words

    No picture can be seen baby. I guess A.P is keeping your ass on lock! Ha-Ha.
    One day we can disscuss your poetry together lying side by side,drinking Wine and eating snacks. (MIKE can be the butler and Roz the Maid)LOL

    • and we will be F***ed up to
      they willl kill us lol

      • kennethlaney
        February 5

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        Yeah they probably would if they walked in and I was hollering "OH BABY THAT FEELS SOOOO GOOOD" "MAKE ME COME JULIA" THEY might think about murder.LOL

  • Swangrnv gold member
    February 4
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    and since i am in fact an artist...

    I do and the imagery was captivating.good write poetess.

  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    September 23, 2007

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    Simply beautiful and wonderfully written.
    I love the imagery and emotions in this.
    I think you did a great job with this one
    my friend. Well done and thanks a lot for
    sharing this one with me!




    Jeremy0826


  • Unperson
    September 21, 2007

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    You really have captured the picture with your imagery here... the description is so vivid, the words just mould themselves into living, breathing art. Beautiful.

  • Swangrnv gold member
    September 17, 2007
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    wow...wow!

    wow!!this is good!


  • Bloody Fragrance
    September 15, 2007

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    Perfection at it's finest.

    What a wonderful piece you have written. With each and every word you chose I could see the picture coming to life. "Her soul of art has captured me, I have lost the pattern of my time." That line there truly spoke to me. That's when we can say "To be captured in the moment." This piece, for one reason or another, made me think of a sculpturist. The beauty of sculpting something so sensual would be amazing. And as the chisel hits the hard stone, her music would come to life.

    A beautiful piece!

    . Rewarded 8


    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      September 16, 2007
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      thanks so so much for reading my most cherish piece my friend i owe you onepetals
      jewels

  • crystallynnbradford
    September 13, 2007

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    this should really be in my contest!!!!!!!!!!!!! gold trophy if my contest was still active!!!!! i love this piece

  • crystallynnbradford
    September 12, 2007
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    and why isn't this in my contest?

    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      September 14, 2007
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      awe thanks i see your comming to view the history on me thanks i am very sensitive about my art inspired pieces we would have to fight if i didnt win gold on it because tis is rather one of my favorite pieces ever thanks for reading it dear i was honored * jewels *
  • KadafiethaInfamous
    August 18, 2007

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    There She Lays the Art of Noise Pt. 2

    There she lays like a beautiful red rose,
    the finest aroma that has ever crossed my nose,
    her beauty is perfection, unmatched by no other,
    my soul she has captured, my heart she does cover,
    She's my one and only treasure, my gift in life,
    the very thought of her illiminates all strife.

    . Rewarded 6


  • ellipsist
    August 14, 2007

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    I keep coming back to this piece

    everything about it just enthralls me! from the title to the combination of words... the lyrical flow, yeah, even the picture, but not that so much... If I have not told you before, I absolutely LOVE the way that this piece ends:

    "There she lays,
    The art of my noise,
    Her melody isn’t profound.
    Not even in chorus."

    so beautiful and really, more profound than I think even you know... it touches and hits on so many different levels...

    I really wish I could applaud again!

  • Blaque01
    August 10, 2007
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    jus had to read this again

  • quantumsurveyor
    July 24, 2007

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    So touching, so real, heartfelt and timeless in the essence of its beauty. A wonderfully evocative piece that captures a still moment of sheer elegant beauty. Thanks for the read.
    Donald

  • Blaque01
    July 18, 2007
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    If i could give u a round of applause i would..but for now i just smile and marvel at ur talent


  • darell
    July 16, 2007

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    WOW!

    Passionately provocative and erotically beguiling.
    A wonderful journey inside one's own sexuality.
    An author once wrote,"to thine ownself be true."
    Loving yourself and enjoying the intimate dimensions
    that make up self is priceless. Its like an unbreakable
    chain. Bravo my sweet sweet poet!


    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      July 16, 2007
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      awe thanks i am very well inspired and in to my art work poetry and i just touched it up i like it a whole lot and i am glad you liked it gave you another side of lady enthralling i am in 5 secs about to put my other piece on these are pieces when i first got on here and no one paid attention to them exept people who really love me gerry your so sweet

  • ellipsist
    July 15, 2007
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    beautiful, and intense... you have

    conveyed the depth and breadth of emotion quite well in this piece and it is contagious!



    well done!


  • Denierim
    July 12, 2007

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    Oh, I love the imagery you used here. How you painted a real model with mere words well thought of. I think this is one of the best poems I've read in a while, and I usually don't like works like this... Wonderful work with this one!


    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      July 12, 2007
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      awe! i found myself feeling the same way about a lot of work believe it are not and i am honored you liked it cause besides erotic i rip the run way lol with this type of work. ~ lady enthralling ~

  • Griswold silver member
    July 8, 2007

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    Well Julia my dear, this is a side of you that you need to explore more often, you do it well doll. I was enthralled Ms. Enthralling. ... Scott


    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      July 8, 2007
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      awe scott! you shocked me. i ca't believe you read something of mines period well let me take that back my art inspired pieces. thans love yes i do pretty well with this type of write it is my favorite besides acrostic thank

  • Bedroom Eyes
    July 6, 2007

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    The imagery is outstanding in this piece Julia, and the graphic is breathtaking. It's difficult to write from the opposite sex's point of view isn't it? I've done it once or twice myself, but could never really capture it well.

    I've read some of your work before. so I know you style is geared towards sensual & steamy I think you did a great job using the art as your inspiration. You get lots of bunnies for this


    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      July 8, 2007
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      thanks love yea i cant stay away from spicing up sex appeal but i love writing in this field also a have more of these you just haven't ran across them i shall return the favor shortly

  • Heavenly Angel
    June 29, 2007

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    This is a totally awesome and cool piece of poetry, my friend!
    Most wonderful imagery and your wording is excellent!
    Thank you for sharing this!
    Wonderfully done!!!

  • onesugar silver member
    June 15, 2007

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    Stunning

    The imagery is excellent. she lays there in the most breath taking way relaxing a pose on her shoulders.
    With her lips pressed firmly against mine,
    her soul of art has captured me,
    I am robbing the world with the intent of her in my mind.I just love that bit its as though i'm there. Truly AWESOME.


  • Swan song gold member
    May 28, 2007

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    This poem is a wonderfuly honest peice of art. It flows son well. I can see the image but at the pace where you can enjoy them as you read along.


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    May 27, 2007

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    Stunning Writing

    Really beautiful and stunning writing here. You have written this from deep inside you, it seems. I love this piece of work of yours. I have liked everything that you have written so far. And, if I have not already done so, I am putting you down as one of my fave writers. You're fantastic.

    Wayne


  • Ephiphany gold member
    May 26, 2007

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    Superb.....

    This is Great Julia....Very well Penned work you got here. Wonderful Photo also.

    The way she posses art she should be locked away in the lost of towers,
    the art of noise washes my soul in different complete showers.
    I release a melody, with rays of her different powers.
    I am weak willed for her, and the most sad coward.
    Peach trees sadden by my motives,
    I need her help, to simply control it.
    The arch in her back, is so unique perfectly molded.
    Motions released and my fingers stroke the strings of my violin,
    There she lays, my soul is corrupted by her in violence.
    Silence, so I can remain the.
    Special love she always wanted in me.
    There she lays,
    The art of my noise,

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