I l♥ve him and I know he loves me
He says it, but in .;different;. ways
His vile words, and tight fists
He loves me
And leaves marks to show it
♥
[5]Five swollen cheek bones
[4]Four cracked ribs
[3]Three chipped teeth
[2]Two black eyes
[1]One love
(("Wake up dahling, you deserve better"))
But daddy did the same thing
to mommy
She said it's just what guys do
But they still *love us*
(("You need to leave him!""))
But he says he's sorry
...... And I love him so
He's going through a lot
I just can't leave him like this
He put me in the hospital
With .3rd.-degree burn
I told the doctors my lighter
fluid spilled all over
But he did it with the stove
Because I was an hour late
He was just teaching me a lesson,
Please! just leave him alone
My boyfriend beats me every night
But I stay by his side, not out of fright
But cuz no one else will love me
So I have to stay, you see?
Author notes
option three -
"He hit me && it felt like kisses"
charleighEX
A contest entry
- Invite Only, Come && See if ur Name is here by AshliiAsphyxiation.
1000 points, ended June 10, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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really nice. I ike the use of the (( as another voice, a voice of reason. great job.
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this is awesome dahling, im loving it muchly.. i can relate to this all.
1 little critique, please put ur name into the AC, but other than that, this here is a flawless peice of work.
Good luck! && thanks for entering
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