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Time to wait

There is such a longing in me
something I can't fill any other way
everyone says wait, take your time
remember this is no easy task

I'm aching inside, so tired of wait
everyday it grows stronger
everyday the force in me screams
but my head says "no, you should wait"

wait wait wait

wait wait wait

It's easy to say you should wait
but some things are not as easy to forget
and everyone knows what I want is coming someday
everyone wants what I want

but they all say to wait

wait wait wait

wait wait wait

Author notes

longing for something, but being told to wait some more. There will always be expenses.

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  • theprodigalsister
    May 30, 2007

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    I can just guess what this poem is eluding to... The pitter-patter of little feet perhaps?? Yes, well waiting is wise, but I can understand your impatience... Wonderful job here