Exploring the mighty rainforest
I found beauty far beyond
the unique essence of nature.
Trees fragrant with delicate fruit
mango’s are my pleasure
delicious sweetness; I treasure.
Precious sanity, precious lover
island ingredients dance
in the shadow of your smile.
Over the hillside; enter my paradise
forget our deepest regrets
find yourself anew with me awhile.
Seduce my sultry thoughts with
your wanton availability
whisper; ardent request in my ear.
Prompting our hearts to disappear
pouring your soul out I give;
you attention in the water so clear.
(misty raindrops)
Confining passion inside of me as;
I tickle your egos fantasy
in harmony with Eros’ goal.
Within this righteous hideaway my
appetite wet; oral desire
I gave love my all, he conquered
my
Soul.
Author notes
Just putting my imagery to work, since its time for an island vacation...fun in the midnight sun!
A contest entry
- Invite Only; Me on Their List by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended January 3, 2008, 79 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Truly has the setting, imagination and beautiful words to make it a tropical paradise of love to be shared. I want to thank you for entering my "Invite Only; Me On Their List" contest.
Ted E
PS: Once I have commented on all of your entries, then I will reread them all and choose the one that will be brought forward for being selected as Gold, Silver, Bronze or HM.
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Well Done!!
Island pride!!!! Anyways, I thoroughly enjoyed this write!!! The imagery you provided brought back memories of St. Croix, and gave me sensual shudders of an uncontrollable nature...well almost!! Well Done!!! Well Done!!!
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very nicely done, tropical style
very nice imagery of the background of trees fragrances and the feel of tropics, sweet fruits and the words carry the expressive parts very well, gives soft images...very nicely done...PK
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Fantasy, Gaugahn (spelling?), colors in vibrant tropical hues become rich, spells cast and the heat sinks deep into the sands. All for a man you song sings until we hear it ring in our hearts.
Delicious.
Love, Tom B.
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Eotically Beautiful!!
What an ardent expression of Island Love ….A romantic interlude in the night of a swollen moon and the water is clear and warm…. and I hear
the agreeable whisper………
“Seduce my sultry thoughts with
your wanton availability
whisper; ardent request in my ear”.
How wondrously perfect is this night … thank you Novy I will cherish this very beautiful poem ……
thanks again my dear…
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Can I come too
You paint it perfectly Novy and I would give anything to be on a island right now. Love, C
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Lady Chez, sure
Wouldn't that be nice if all the AP poets could get together for a nice shake-hands and meet..somewhere in the islands.........I'll love it but so many have to work..I just travel, and have fun paying bills...LOL
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