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Eyes of Night

I think of them endlessly
As I slowly fall to sleep
Future visions burn my MIND
Pleasured pain of things in TIME

Tormented, daily
(She is my HOPE)
My guardian angel
(She is my HOPE)

Calling Out
To the eyes of LOVE
Calling Out
To the angel cast from above
Calling out
To her entity of LIGHT
Calling out
To the darkened eyes of night

My heart once blackened coal
Seeping bloodstains on my soul
Of LAW and LOVE I break the mold
Locked in ICE, I fell so cold

Tormented, daily
(She is my HOPE)
My guardian angel
(She is my HOPE)

Calling Out
To the eyes of LOVE
Calling Out
To the angel cast from above
Calling out
To her entity of LIGHT
Calling out
To the darkened eyes of night

Darkness, full of LIGHT
Incandescent, burning bright
Lost, in eyes of night

The eyes of my LIFE!

When you've gazed upon her...tell me...

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  • Indeed
    May 29, 2007

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    Amazing

    This has so many multipule meanings. this poem could be good for anyone. people that are are suffering, people that are happy. people in Love, people getting over Love.. it's just refreshing and renewing.
    Good Job!


  • ThatColinKid
    May 26, 2007

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    Nice write, I can read them like lyrics to a song. Very nice, I would love to talk to you sometime about turning some of your poems to lyrics for my band, But that is all up to you, you have a vrey great poetic mind.