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I'm better with knives.

Dilated eyes peer hopefully,
Into pools of their own misery.
My curves have straightened your views
On self harm and poetry.
Does your conscience make you queasy,
Or are you still waiting for a ring;
Your voice mail is full.

A contest entry

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  • Lj-
    May 27, 2007

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    Very cool. I love the feeling. Mysterious.


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