The sun on the horizon
Filling the sky with gentle reds
And soft oranges
Hand in hand we walk
Staring blissfully in to the others eyes
We stop and our lips meet
In a moment like an hour
An hour like a day
A day like an eternity
Our eyes shut to the beauty
Around us
Focusing on the beauty
Between us
Isn’t it funny?
How being with that
One special person
Can make you blissfully ignorant
To the most beautiful moment
And blissfully enthralled
By the beauty before you.
Author notes
#6
A contest entry
- Kiss And Tell by WarmHeartedGeisha.
550 points, ended May 31, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Isn’t it funny?
How being with that
One special person
Can make you blissfully ignorant
To the most beautiful moment
And blissfully enthralled
By the beauty before you.
this stanza right here makes me just smile, i like this poem you did here, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest -
Wow! This is really good, u have written a very strong peice here. I really like it all but these lines had POPed when I read them: We stop and our lips meet
In a moment like an hour
An hour like a day
A day like an eternity
Our eyes shut to the beauty
Around us
Focusing on the beauty
Between us
Wonderful write!
P.S. Plz do not respond 2 my comment, ty
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