i remember him laughing
every time i eat apples
he loved the green ones
i cant stop eating them
for that's a strong memory
i can still see him with me
while we ate and talked
about anything at all
many times i wept for him
although he wasn't well
cancer was eating his brain
death was just a relief
memories are slowly fading
i dream about him sometimes
they do hurt deep inside
but i dont want to leave him
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in memory of Alberto Heler, my grandfather who died.
i cant stop eating green apples, for i remember eating those with him, and i can really still feel like he's by my side when i eat them.
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This is truly touching
To have this simple item to remind you of all the happy times you shared with your Grandfather
I am so very sorry to hear that he has passed
Your poem is a lovely tribute about your love you hold in your heart for him!
I wish you all the best in the contest!
Jasminerose
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thank you for the sweet cmment.
i do miss him a lot, and green apples remind me of him
that's the only bad thing about death
i find it like.. the end, for which, the end of pain as well..
thanks again for the comment =]
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aw this is lovely hun, im sorry for the loss of your grandfather. its nice you have the apples as such a strong link to him, im sure he is smiling down on you from somewhere. thanx for the entry, well done on the write xx
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thanks for the comment, its weird how i got this link through apples..
its like a..
i think its called Caligula.
always my pleasure to write,and good luck with judging!
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