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Thanking You


I’ve always had bad tastes
When it came to love
My heart rushed with haste,
Adventure it never had enough;

I fell and felt cheap
Always hurt, and misunderstood
Hope elopes and despair creeps
Whenever lied to and fooled.

Blue were your eyes
That guided me back to home,
Soft was you touch that minimized
All the pain, and over tears won.
Living everyday, to the fullest and smiling again,
Happy you are with me—truly heaven sent.

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  • Crazy-Baby
    May 26, 2007

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    aw this is very sweet, i especially love;
    'I fell and felt cheap
    Always hurt, and misunderstood
    Hope elopes and despair creeps
    Whenever lied to and fooled.'
    i can totally relate, well done and thanx for entering x