The gypsies eyes spoke of a life,
Where tears were danced away.
Singing songs on winds of cheer,
They brightened everyday.
The gypsies hair spoke of a life,
Where every day is free.
Dancing on the hills of peace,
Every moment filled with glee.
The gypsies smile spoke of a life,
Where everything was fine.
Fights never broke the caravan,
cause everyone was kind.
The gypsies gems spoke of a life,
Where beauty was portrayed.
As men stared at the goddesses,
The gypsies danced away...
A contest entry
- Inspire me by Molassis.
800 points, ended May 30, 2007, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - My first year on AP by forever dreaming.
450 points, ended June 17, 2007, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wouldn't it be great to have this kind of life? I like the feel of this piece and how it is put together. A very good effort. Many thanks for entering my contest.
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I dunno exactly what I liked best about this piece... while reading I noticed my foot tapping to the beat... the rhymes were also great..
It's a delightful, fun and cute read.. one which I enjoyed greatly!
Best wishes to you in this contest! Thanks so much for entering!
~Melissa -
If only we all had this gypsy's life! Thanks for sharing in the fun! This was a delight to read! Best wishes in the contest! Thanks for entering!
Frogz~
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