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The friend in me

Thoughts to the mind, feelings to the heart say,
Beneath every despair, there's hope, come what may.

Whatever happens, happens for the good,
A truth often heard, but seldom understood.

Pope said, "whatever is, is right",
Against the unseen forces, we still wish we could fight.

Lying dormant as a virtue, can not elicit compassion,
For, evasiveness mustn't turn into a self destructing passion.

Draw life from where the void exists,
Suffering as a source of strength, will never let grief persist.

Un-dying faith, never-ending smiles,
God's splendid grace, spread across the miles.

Finding your way, out of every hardship and strife,
Purging the soul of every possible emotion, is the supreme goal of life.

When the cup of joy, seems to be emptying,
When every familiar face, turns to you interrogating,
call my name...

When life and all its strategies, seem to grow exasperating,
Drops of passion and fervor, seem to be evaporating,
Don't be afraid, joys await...

When dreams and hopes, seem to be deserting,
And that is left, seems to be debilitating,
Let my shoulders be your pillow...

Waiting to give you courage and love,
To reach together, the heights,
and to give you wings to soar the Heavens above.


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Option 6:

sakpase





Choice 4: FRIENDSHIP



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  • Zoe2007
    August 7, 2008

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    "Whatever happens, happens for the good,
    A truth often heard, but seldom understood." i really like that bit of the poem . it makes me feel light and not scared any more . well done . good luck


  • Angel Crest
    August 6, 2008
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    A wonderful write..I absolutely love it!


  • Swan song gold member
    August 6, 2007
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    I think this is a very nice write Good job


  • Scrunter
    July 3, 2007

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    I feel this write comes straight from the heart and was a pleasure to read.

    Good luck and thank you for entering.


  • MlilAngel
    June 30, 2007

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    =)

    This really made me smile, I loved this write it's a good connection with friendship. Thank you very much for entering my contest! Good luck!!

    Thanks & Love,
    *MJ*


  • Madison Mary
    June 29, 2007

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    This is so amazingly inspiring!! Thank you so much for this entry, it's absolutely beautiful! Keep up the awesome work! xoxo


  • Dlvvanzor
    June 28, 2007

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    Perfect for the contest and perfect for her. Thank you so much. This will be sent.

    Thank you for helping my friend,
    -Dlvvanzor


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    June 13, 2007
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    This is very sweetly written; I very much enjoyed this piece...thank you so much for sharing!


  • faded dreams
    June 5, 2007
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    Nicely worded. Inspiring and sweet. Thank you for this entry. Good luck in my contest.


  • slipperssun gold member
    May 27, 2007

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    thank you for the heartfelt words for Kassie... i wish you well in my contest. it is a nice and calming piece that you have penned
    cheers
    jen


  • Raggedy Ann
    May 27, 2007
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    Absolutely beautiful

    You seem to be a very compassionate and caring man. This is an amazing poem, so carefully considerite of your fellow humans.

    May I print this? I would like to be able to carry this with me to read when I need comfort. I know I'm not a friend or anything, but it'd be like calling your name, across the miles...

    ~dena

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