The rain plays a melody against my window
joining in the song of loneliness
adding to the mood of the downhearted
the heavens open up in solidarity of my pain
Take another sip from my dark red wine
the bitter taste makes me long for your sweet lips
memories of our nights of passion assault my senses
the storm outside pales in comparison
Drinking in the music and melody
the singer joins me in my heartache
it seems he knows my hurt and pain
take another sip from glass as I toast to your memory
The distant sound of thunder diminishes with time
sound of the rain eventually is gone as well
The bottle lays empty and alone at my feet
another night without is all the remains
The rain plays a melody against my window
joining in the song of loneliness
adding to the mood of the downhearted
the heavens open up in solidarity of my pain
A contest entry
- Give Me Your Best!!! by Tomorrows Window.
300 points, ended June 2, 2007, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This work of art is amazing. Thunderstorms brings out emotions that everything else doesn't. I love this poem. Great job! Good luck in the contest!
<3 Jenerali -
I find it hard to believe that I am the only one who enjoys your work. Anyway, I really liked this piece. I've always loved thunder storms, they've always seemed to coincide with how I'm feeling, I was just never able to put it to words. Well, good luck in the contest.
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