Whispers...
Dance in the wind
Makes everything alive
Changes the marvelous rhythm
Shares the secrets of another person
Makes someone joyous or grievous
Won't hold back anything
Gives me wisdom
Whispers
Author notes
5/26/2007
rickametre
A contest entry
- Rictameters/word bank 2 by ever1der.
450 points, ended May 30, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Ages 13 and Under ONLY ~ Rictameters! by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended July 13, 2007, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh this is beautiful your talent shines with this lovely write I just love the flow and imagery and the tones are perfect....
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Ahhh yes the wisdom that is captured with the whispering winds. So lovely and enchantingly do they speak to us. Best of luck to you!
Blessings
celticmoon
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This is a beautiful poem
One little thing, in this line:
"Won't hold back anything" for a rictameter you should have six syllables there, you only have five. so you may want to rework it a tad on that line before contest end
You could always try "will not" instead of "won't" that would fix the count or "they won't" 
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ummm...one thing...anything has 3 syllables...
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I like it, you've done a wonderful job, keep it up
-kevin
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wonderful poem on whispers!!! i just love the whole thing! i think its amazing cuz i could never think of that many things...to do with whispers!!! again i say amazing poem!!!
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great rict. I love the words shadows and whispers...maybe because they're both soft. Anyway, I really like this and thank you for the entry.
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