Im old its told
but my pockets
full o gold
[do you like money honey]
the young women
drop to their knees
to please an old man
[some like it that way]
with direction
i get an erection
and they swallow me whole
[spitting not allowed]
oh dont cry
some got in your eye
ill pay extra for that
[you do this well i can tell]
but my pockets
full o gold
[do you like money honey]
the young women
drop to their knees
to please an old man
[some like it that way]
with direction
i get an erection
and they swallow me whole
[spitting not allowed]
oh dont cry
some got in your eye
ill pay extra for that
[you do this well i can tell]
Author notes
I really don't know the definition of Dirrty Pretty, but I read a few of them. This is a first attempt at this. I see this kind of thing all the time since I'm a DJ. The old guys hitting on the barely legal women, kinda makes me sick...If it does not fit, can it and I will be right behind ya doing the same. I'm too old for this newfangled stuff...lol
A contest entry
- Amazing Dirty Pretty (prewrites allowed) by KittieLyyn.
360 points, ended May 27, 2007, 9 entries
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i like it!


