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Sick Bastard!!!

Im old its told
    but my pockets
          full o gold
                [do you like money honey]

the young women
    drop to their knees
          to please an old man
                      [some like it that way]

with direction
    i get an erection
          and they swallow me whole
                          [spitting not allowed]

oh dont cry
    some got in your eye
          ill pay extra for that
                          [you do this well i can tell]

Author notes

I really don't know the definition of Dirrty Pretty, but I read a few of them. This is a first attempt at this. I see this kind of thing all the time since I'm a DJ. The old guys hitting on the barely legal women, kinda makes me sick...If it does not fit, can it and I will be right behind ya doing the same. I'm too old for this newfangled stuff...lol

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