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I Choose You

Looking into your eyes
I see the hate and fear of a thousand dieing children
Forgotten and mislead into terrible pain
However, I also see the love and compassion
Of a thousand mothers
Who would willingly give their life
To save their pained children

This is why I chose you
Over everyone else
...I chose you...
Because you do not wish to be perfect
You are not fake
Your emotions are very real
You do not try to impress me
Yet you do, day by day

This is why I chose you
Over everyone else
So now I say to you
With all of my heart
“I love you”

Someone else's spoken words, translated from my hands

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  • Eusebius
    November 6, 2007
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    bravo

    So lovely and so very heartfelt...a wonderful write indeed... bravo... bravo...


  • Ethereal One gold member
    May 26, 2007
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    very beautiful

    The words you have used, and the sentiment portrayed, show that you not only love this person, but that you respect them also. I think so many of us do wish for a person to think of us, and love us in this way.

    Thank you for entering this contest, and good luck!

    Aurora 2012