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Arms of a loved one

Thousands of stars fill the sky tonight
  As thoughts of him fill my mind
And I wonder if I've finally found
  what I've tried so hard to find.

We inch closer to one another
  and his hand, it touches mine
And this little bit of contact
  sends chills all down my spine

And I marvel at his eyes,
they sparkle in the moonlight.

**Chorus**
Now we're in eachothers arms
And it's here that I will stay
Everything is just so perfect
But he'll throw it all away.

The truth came out tonight
  the one he's hidden all along
What once had felt so right
  was apparently all wrong.

My head just spins in circles now
  Don't know which way is up anymore
Cuz the one I thought was perfect
  was just a lying, cheating, whore.

And I wonder, just how his eyes would
sparkle in my fucking headlights.

**chorus**
We were in eachothers arms
And it's there I thought I'd stay
Everything it seemed so perfect
Then he threw it all away.

I lost myself in his pale blue eyes,
  As his big red lips told little white lies
He fed me so much bull and I ate it all
  I let her pick me up, never imagined he'd let me fall.

He came to me this morning
  and he finally came clean
He told me he was sorry
  sorry about everything

I couldn't help but to forgive her
  call me stupid, I don't care
You don't know just how sincere he was
  cause you weren't there.

We're back in eachother's arms
And this time I hope we'll stay
I know it can't be perfect
But nothing's perfect anyway

The road may be a bumpy one
That's the price we'll have to pay
I'll give you my trust, my love, my all
Please don't throw it all away






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  • flounder416
    February 13

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    very good

    I like this alot, just when it switches between "him" and "her" it's a little confusing. It's a very good piece either way and wish you the best of luck!


  • Angel of Musik
    May 29, 2007

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    Ouch.

    This is very full of understanding for me.
    I like this verse the most:

    I lost myself in his pale blue eyes,
    As his big red lips told little white lies
    He fed me so much bull and I ate it all
    I let her pick me up, never imagined he'd let me fall.

    I was terribly hurt by a man with these incredibly pale blue eyes. And all along he was lying to me about a girl that he was cheating with. Turned out to be a girl that I loved a lot..like a sister.

    Great job, thank you.