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drunk me

Here I am
drunk as can be
all alone as you can see
and I know its because of me
I say things that I shouldnt
I want others hurt as I am.
Sitting here wishing I had
someone to hold me and tell me
how much I mean to them.
I am alone, drunk as can be.



written by: drunken old me

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Yea I am drunk, but oh well.

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  • Bataran
    August 28, 2007
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    nice poem


  • Fairy Nutty Buddy silver member
    August 3, 2007

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    The line "drunk as can be" makes me chuckle, although this poem as a whole is sad and lonely and confused. Well done, Amanda.

  • Morgan222
    May 25, 2007
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    wow

    i love this one