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[ Moonlight over the mountain ]

Moonlight over the mountain
somewhere in the world..

I wish I were there.




I need...
hope,

no more...
things,
creeping up on me..
Ghosts,
not literally..

No more...
looking ahead
at nothing..
eyes broken,
not caring..

I need...
touch,
so very escaping
into the mountain
where the moonlight
shines above.

Right now...
I'm gone,
but not there..


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  • Napoet
    May 28, 2007

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    Rich with imagery

    This one is deep, very deep. I enjoyed it very much. A broken soul, seeking escape is a difficult thing to express, but you have done so here. Impressive.


  • brightXdarkness
    May 25, 2007

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    I like the part where it says "eyes broken, not caring" I think thats about it. And also, when it said "Ghosts, not literally," I thought to myself, "yes literally."