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I feel like shit

So dark..

So lonely,
confused...

dont know what to think,
mind blank
noises, blink
on
off
on
off
stay off..
for now...

I dont..
understand..
but...
I see,
like a blind man..
something is happening,

what ever it is...
i feel like..
shit

Please tell me what you think

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  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    May 29, 2007

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    I think a lot of people are feeling like tis from time to time, and some are getting over it sooner then others...lucky for them and sad for the ones that don't....

    Great write with sad feelings,
    and I loved the SHIT word
    because that's how I feel too,
    SHIT,
    XXJeannette


  • brightXdarkness
    May 25, 2007

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    shitzo. Keep the noises off will you? I like the part, "I see, like a blind man.. something is happening" It makes it kind of eerie and suspicious even. yep. I'm going to actually stop now before I start to get mean again. But... you said "shit." and in the title too.

  • MoonLitOcean
    May 25, 2007
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    i've had so many friggin days like that it makes no sense!