I'm just sitting
Here in my car
Awaiting the arrival
Of the girl
She's so scared that I will
Take her away from here
Afraid that her family
Will abandon her
I will care for her
Take her to a new home
Mezerized and hypnotized
By the life she has
Watching her from
Way up in the sky
On the highway
Of eternal life
So why don't you ask me
Where I was today?
Going from town to
The place where she always lived
Now that she is gone
I am still right there
Looking for signs of
Any sort of life
I'm just sitting
Here in my car
Awaiting the arrival
Of the girl
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The car thing reminds me of the lyrics to hypnotize by system of a down! VERY GREAT SONG
nicely put though.. though it seems to me like you copied the song... the mezmerized hypnotized thing makes me believe it more simply because that was the name of the last two cds they put out (that was suppose to be one, so they go hand in hand) umm
yea
its good but really did they inspire you? -
sometimes letting go is something that the heart can't do, i see that as i read this, you did a great job on this keep ti flowing
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