I honor you with flowers this Memorial Day
Another year has passed since you went away
Memories are etched in the chambers of my heart
A masterpiece of love, priceless work of art
With love I gaze upon the deep blue sky
As tears begin to fall from my tired eyes
I softly hum, your all time favorite song
The Old Rugged Cross, my heart beats along
With the pulsating rhythm, flowing through my veins
This grandaughter's love forever remains
A moment only separates a lifetime of love
Soon we will embrace in Heaven above
Author notes
option 3 Razorblade kisses
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Very touching. I could tell you love your grandmother dearly.
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Such a wonderful tribute to Memorial Day. What a powerful and touching write
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'Memorial Day...
'This brings to mind for me many many things I thank you for the reminders...
I thank you for the sharing of this write with us your viewers...
and all the best to you as well... -
Some beautiful phrasing in this piece. I especially like:
"Memories are etched in the chambers of my heart" and
"A moment only separates a lifetime of love"
Well penned!
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Beautiful
This is a beautiful poem and I really liked it!
Good luck
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Welcome to Memorial!
This is a very loving poem, full of thoughts for one gone only a year.
This grandaughter's love forever remains
A moment only separates a lifetime of love
Soon we will embrace in Heaven above
This is beautiful, thank you so much for your entry. Good luck in the contest.
Susie -
very good, absolutely stunning
this is great, i love the way you describe in this. you know i could use your light in my group. but be for warned, it's mostly dark and depressing.so if you can't read that don't join. and if you can lighten us up a bit. think about it will you. *the shunned*
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