trampoline
photo album
theme
Author notes
use only words please, poet
sunny connectively?
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Interesting
I came up with the conclussion as to these three words you have posted her ein this poem. I found that you can jump/lay down/sit on a trampoline while working on your photo album hint that it is a theme. It is just my opinion. A very unusual poem but an interesting poem. good work and keep up the good work
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you gave me a bit more than just words but thank you very much for your thought process
SmokinHotWhiteTiger (doing stuff that makes you forget you're human?),
Thanks for pausing here between other pieces you could go to.
You concententated for a tie in indeed, while I was yet looking for the comparison of as if from jumped poses so to speak capturing turned pages like through a photo album, thus one flash of thought reinforced similar to a theme!
I'm glad it was found unusual but worthwhile to take some time with. My literal exploration of ideas from exercising high and then seeing an actual picture made me want to to have the couple of things clicked on together the way we can get it linked by flipping brain per se.
It was fun and getting response,
Carolyn
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Hi there! I do not understand what this is all about. To me these appear as three disconnected words and I fail to see the connection between them. Kindly explain how is this a senryu.
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kindly done now?
Charishma (as an Australian?),
Hello too!
I'm sorry this short list didn't start an assembly of imagination.
Think of trampoline action with new grin going up and again with a twist this time and hand out next for expression... it starts generating the joy of being like in front of a camera or the record of it in a manual slide show effect!
It has stretches of focus of one thing, so a theme -- from which you can can go backwards and have an assortment to what only can fit on the bounce of what you desire to scintillate in a telling of anything at this time, and so forth. Thus it went from physical to psychological desion enthusiasm. I loved it. But simplicity is tested with the people sometimes, so thanks for stopping by with comment.
1:14 took a phone call though Dwight was outside but would take a message when I wasn't in the best mood of not being shy if it were him, and now so strangely happy to keep trying because it was a newspaper salesman I was able to talk to well with things taught by him or introduced from along with my humor.
~Carolyn
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