Sweet emotion
Total devotion
Dreaming of time with you
Touching feeling and kissing too
Sharing
Caring
Looking forward to this
Your company, I’ve missed
Been to long
Since you’ve gone
My heart rejoices
With our choices
Waiting for so long
Already feeling you belong
Excited
Delighted
Only a few more weeks
For everything my heart seeks
Total devotion
Sweet emotion
In a list
A contest entry
- Twenty Nine Options :) by Heavenly Angel.
475 points, ended June 4, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nice wittian poem Jen, and filled with yearning and love for the return of a special person. I like the sensous feeling that come out from your words. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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this is cool, i like this poem it is like something else, but yet it is all you, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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what an excellent write. god i'm not very good at any kind of form poetry and i see you writing all different styles of it lol the farthest i have been able to go id free style and some half assed rhyming
anyways, these words are full of love and excitement. full of anticipation, it's just breath taking. best of luck in the contest sweetie
be well and be blessed
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Oh yeah...I like this! Excellent! You've captured a lot of my anticipation within your lines
Very well done! Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest! Yayy!
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