An angel
fallen
kicked away
disrespected
now paranoid
the dark...
and scared
for future...
Misunderstood
ridiculed
fights
too much!
too much!
too much!
...too much!
No more!
Cant escape,
wings stolen
..I find you
walking
face down
thinking
trying to ignore
screams..
pain..
Angels don't deserve the devils fate...
i care
i want to know
i wont judge
For i already see
from what has become of me
i see deeper into your eyes
blue eyes
poluted ocean,
was once beautiful
though still are
ill help clean
i want to care
and find the animals
the figures of your true
personality
However
you're...
unsure
what to think
..take your time
I'll wait
I'll talk
I'll understand
For i was in the sky
once fell down
dirty in mud
kicked around
misunderstood
i still am..
But i found the light
through all the dark nights
Hope
still here
i want you to be safe.
I want you to trust.
I want you to understand
that people care,
that i care too.
Angels don't deserve the devils fate!
Author notes
please dont take me writing this poem the wrong way..like i said, i just like to write what i feel. I'm very open, im not writing this for any other reason, please dont make any other reason.
Please tell me what you think
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I like the format of this poem (and god it's hot in my room right now) but the format is good... but the flow is chunky, I think that could be easily fixed though if you want it to be (unless you want it chunky). I have my own ideas about what this poem is about, but blue eyes and the polluted ocean? I mean... what is up with that? (and sorry, I'm really irritable right now). So I think I'm actually going to stop picking on this poem and go read and pick on the other ones... or something... i have no idea what I'm doing now. I may be up all night though as far as I can tell.
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