You say I'm ugly
You don't like my clothes
You don't like my height
Or the size of my nose
You say I'm an outcast
You don't like my style
You don't like my friends
Or the way I smile
You say I'm stupid
You don't like my words
You don't like my opinions
Or how they're overheard
You say you're better than me
But I know better
I have a mind of my own
I'm my own trend-setter
You say you're pretty
But I see you with disguist
You look like such a tramp
Chasing men with your lust
You say I don't belong
You say so many other stupid things
You insult me so much
Tell me, is it supposed to sting?
You say you're smart
But you're too stupid to see that I don't care
I know that there's more to a person
Than the way they wear their hair
You say your perfectly normal
But then why are you so obsessed with me?
Why don't you get your own life
And just let me be?
Could it be that YOU'RE the real FREAK?!
Author notes
Yup...That's exactly what I think when someone says something dumb about me...I evaluate them...then laugh my ass off! It's quite entertaining!!!
A contest entry
- You against the world. by Ember Rose.
600 points, ended June 8, 2007, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Ooh AMEN!
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I like the rhythm. Great message too. It's something that probably everyone can relate to. I find it quite funny too; someone disliking somebody else because of their height or the size of their nose create a really ridiculous mental image.
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I like it, good attitude about a bunch of a** holes.
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You don't like my clothes
You don't like my height
Or the size of my nose
You say I'm an outcast
You don't like my style
You don't like my friends
Or the way I smile
You say I'm stupid
You don't like my words
You don't like my opinions
Or how they're overheard
You say you're better than me
But I know better
I have a mind of my own
I'm my own trend-setter
An ex of mine said that too me once.... all those things. i get this. really..
You say I don't belong
You say so many other stupid things
You insult me so much
Tell me, is it supposed to sting?
You say you're smart
But you're too stupid to see that I don't care
I know that there's more to a person
Than the way they wear their hair
You say your perfectly normal
But then why are you so obsessed with me?
Why don't you get your own life
And just let me be?
YUP. thats exactly how it was....... ugh. the rhyming isnt forced at all which is good. will you put your name/age in the authors notes
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this reminds me of evil girls at my school
very nice rhyming!! you deserved this gold! 
Lise
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hell yea. awsom poem. i love it. people realy need to open there eyes. there alwasys walking with blind eyes. then they just run into walls and get hurt. thats what karma dose. lol. random i know. sorry. the poem is realy good.
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this was really good, and brilliant. It too trun.If some ones to buisy worying about you then to live their own life, then like obviously their obsessed, cus some one who really did or dosent care wouldnt or couldnt be botherd.
thank you for sharing
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