To the jerks
Yeah you know who you are
You will just be clerks
You will never get far
You treat others mean
You act as they don't exsist
You should get your attitude cleaned
Just cause you get kissed
Doesn't mean you will be missed
I hope this makes you pissed
Maybe one day you will get to know how we feel
Then you can know why we kill
Because you say we are run of the mill
So we get buried at the top of the hill
No one to ever kneel
Or to cry over our forgotten souls
So I write to the jerks
Who will never be anything but clerks
Maybe you should've given a ferk
So here's to the jerks
I hope you have fun as clerks
YOU MAJOR JERKS!!!
Please tell me what you think
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hey what is a ferk? and i liked it, good rhyming
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thanks! i have no clue it just came out that way and i thought that i flowed good!!
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Whats a ferk? hehe just wondering! YAAAAAAAAAY You made a rhyming poem Im sooooo happy and its pretty good! I like the jerk clerk rhyme hehe but I guess thats just me! luv ya!
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i think i finally figured out what i meant the word "ferk" to mean.
i believe i had used it to be a stand in word for the "f" word.
I'm guessing due to the fact that i was very mad and using the "f" word
just wouldn't have flowed i used the word i invented called "ferk"!!
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It's a good concept, but like MG said, the jerk/clerk rhyme isn't that good. I suggest using "smirk" or a different rhyming word, or a different word with more rhyme options. Like... "Asshole" xD
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ok so i still dont like the clerks rhyme but its all good your getting better just keep practicing babe and keep writing from the heart cuz thats where the best poems come from well good job loves to you babe...
chrissy
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