lets pack a big lunch and go to the park to play
if the weather holds lets stay there all day.
Lets pack sandwiches and cookies and some chips
lets pack a cooler of drinks and some onion dip.
Lets spread out a blanket under the tree
and watch the kids play as we drink iced tea.
Lets spend time together, family and friends
lets stay here in the park until the day ends.
Author notes
Elvenfairy
A contest entry
- A Family Picnic, Invite Only by Lady-Pegasus.
1050 points, ended June 21, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful
Very well done. Great poem for the contest.
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thanks! Thanks for the applause and thanks for reading.
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Thank you for your contest submission as well as for following the rules. Awww, I will pass on the onion dip
But the rest sounds wonderful and i am sure Vic would eagerly enjoy the dip! So bring it all on and we will indeed have a fun time! A wonderful poem that does make me want to go! 
Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. 
Hetohke'e 
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oo a picnic sounds lovely. would there be smoothies and shade where we could jam to music. *pulls out guitar and sings.
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