Lilac
Thoughts are swimming
Through a creative mind
Put into unrestricted form
Soul and substance with creative genius
Molding words into poetry
Moving our hearts and pens
To write for our
Lilac
Bandit
Queen on the group
Planning, organising
The unruly bunch that we are!
Ambushing with lovingly inspired words
Keeping on the lion legacy
Through a heart untainted
Though you are a
Bandit!
Royal
Highness ruling
Over a family
Lovingly inspiring motives
And urging towards a poetic goal
With tender words encouraging
Sweet flowers to blossom
So we love our
Royal
Our Royal highness Lilac Thoughts
Author notes
Picture by Sharcu
ve you, mum
All my love and hugs
this si for the secret santa! It's Old, but unread by many 
A contest entry
- Show my AP Wife Some love by getsbetter.
1600 points, ended May 27, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank you for making our Secret Santa project so much fun!
3 claps = 9 points
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Very lovely, a great holiday tribute with words of praise. Very apt description of how she has made sure our group lives and breathes together. Well done.
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well done and with such compassion and spirit reigns within your words for her . Love the angel border as I collect angels many blessings always xxx
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What a wonderful gift for a Secret Santa poem! This is just amazing! I think Lilac is gonna love it as much as I do!
and love
Nyetta
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You used this form amazingly well!
So very pretty. And congrats on your trophy. I'm sure she loved (will love) this! Very sweet of you.
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wow. a very beautiful piece. As I was reading it, I could honestly smell it. Like it was perfumed with flowers [could of been all the mentioning of flowers and such!]
It was so sweet and soft. Like a tender hand that was massaging someone's back. Or it was like a calm sea. And the tides were coming in slowly and just gentelly pushing you as you floated on the surface. I really liked that feeling, it was comforting.
all my love
♥
PS. and darling you don't have to write me a poem! just having you love me is more than enough
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Awww, thank you, my love
Your comments always make me SMILE!
And for the lovely poems you have written for me I need to do something in return
Love you honeyness
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The beauty you have created in this glorious rictameter! An intriguing token of your adoration - wonderfully and lovingly penned. I am sure she will be swept away!
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Thank you, my beautiful
Your lovely comments are alway welcome
I lovers you, and you better know it
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Thank you AP step-daughter for writing such a beautiful poem for someone we both care so much about. She is truely a queen...GETS
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Thank you very much, and thank you for holding the contest
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Ah yes, dedication poems that are not obviously dedicational to a specific person, but vast and broad like the mind itself. Brava poetess on a finely done write that paints dreams in splendourous light, and hope as plain a color as lilac.
Blessed be,
Billie Jean
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Thank you SOO much for all of your comments
They are so sweet and beautiful
You're a true poet
Love and hugs
♥
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Wow!!
Precious piece You have written for You Mum a Precious Gem also~
and what a form You have used
Beautifully crafted!!
Thank You for sharing Your Heart
Loved this!!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Another Beauty
Dear sweet Fallen Forever you ar elike an Angel to our poetry site. the way you wrote is just so magical and beautiful that I admire your incredibley skill at adding an image and posting such an incredible ebauty of a poem. any ways I really love how your last two poems just stayed with the same image and background and you dedicated emto the same people which I found special. I really hope you do well in this contest as this is such a very beautifully penned poem. best of luck to you there but keep on penning away 
Signed, Paul
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Thank you so much sweetie!
I'll be on your page soon enough
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