America, the home of the free
America, land of equality
America, but freedom isn't free!
America, this war is our fee
We stopped Saddam
from launching a bomb
Sometimes we get downtrodden
Since we don't have Bin Laden
And we didn't find WMD's
But these lib'rals can't see
They ARE in Iraq
W told me so it's a fact
If you're a patriot you'll understand
that we've got to protect this land
Red white and Blue son
These colors, they don't run!
Author notes
Figured I'd let you know that I'm actually against the war and most things happening in the world right now. You ought to compare this to my poem/song "Under The Weather".
A contest entry
- Bad Poetry by Bapudi.
400 points, ended June 20, 2007, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is so bad.
I love it. -
brilliant!!!!
Wow. This is truly, truly blood-curdlingly bad. And I don't sense any irony or tongue-in-cheekness, except in its blatancy. Finalist for sure.


