a girl in a mask,
but who could she be,
a difficult task,
as we wait to see,
they ask her to dance,
this girl in white,
she won't give them a chance,
not tonight,
she dosn't make a sound,
her mask secure,
she looks around,
not so sure,
this mysterious girl,
goes up to the dance floor,
she twirls then she swirls,
she can't dance anymore,
unable to dance,
she turns around,
and happens to glance,
she can't make a sound,
she tries to go,
unable to stay,
she thought he wouldn't show,
she's got to get away,
he blocks her way,
he tells her how he feels,
she dosn't know what to say,
she can't believeit's real,
he asks her to dance,
they're nose to nose,
she gave him a chnace,
she's the one he chose,
he made up his mind,
her heart is finally mending,
the treasurs they'll find,
i guess this is the end.
Author notes
♥Justina♥
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A contest entry
- Anything. by Andii.
600 points, ended September 15, 2007, 48 entries
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Very pretty
And a poem of yours not labelled sad!
A couple of typos need fixing like chnace and treasurs but ignoring those. I like the short punchy lines, some interesting rhymes, the rhythm is mostly very good. Good poem!
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Aww! This is soo cute! I loved this, it was amazing very cindarellay and also kinda phantom of the opera aswell. This was great! Good luck. ♣♠
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thank you it was a dream i had and i had it after watching cinderella story but it was different but that was the only way i could explain it and again thank you
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i liiiike
this actually reminds me loads of a cinderella story... go figure?
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well i did have this dream not too long after whating that movie
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