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Do I have to Die?

I've been killed,
I have died,
Shot aside.
Why do I have to die?
It makes me just sigh.

I've been shot,
Alot.
I've been sliced,
I've been iced!

All this happens,
Is all because my friend.
I send her gifts,
But all I get back is she shifts me
In the river.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Frozen Fire Poet
    May 25, 2007
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    This was kinda funny! Lol hahahah. You really die that often? You should cry! lol