deepest dugeon,
the last the same,
a place to hold the one's insane,
to rip one's hair out,
the rotten flesh,
driving nails in,
thy sin to bury,
in raging waters,
is hell at best...
is hell at best...
A contest entry
- ~~~Aha...again? #3~~~ by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended May 25, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Hell at best...wow! A powerful phrase to use...absolutely dark and amazingly written in short words..I like the refrence to raging waters..it gives the setting an eerie look! Great work here!
Thanks for entering and good luck!
hugs n kisses
preets
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thanx
awesome?
thanx preets always a pleasure i was going for the idea of what hell is? lost, lonely, alone? afraid and mostly captive!~
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