your beautiful skin leaves me breathless
your lipstick shines off the morning sun
I lean over for a meaningful kiss
you softly fade to heartbroken dust
my head falls in deep sadness
tears streaming down my skin
you gave me pain when you left
I can't stop thinking about you
anger fills my black heart
I want to kill him
he will pay for his killing
blood will spill
your murderer will suffer
my love for you will kill
the man who took you away
love can do many things
but well see what anger brings.
Author notes
Option 2: For this option I want poems about lost loved one's, whether they have passed away or just made a choice to stay out of your life and how that makes you feel.
A contest entry
- Give Me Your Best!!! by Tomorrows Window.
300 points, ended June 2, 2007, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Fun Filled Contest by Darc Soul.
600 points, ended June 9, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your Best Poems by Lj-.
300 points, ended June 10, 2007, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful write, packed full of love, loss, and rage. Great job. Good luck in the contest!
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This is full of emotions and I can feel every one of them. Great write and good luck in the contest!
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Wow. This was so powerful and I love your choice of words. It makes everything so intense, just like Darc Soul said. I loved this piece cuz it has such a powerful message that I don't usually see, but I love it.
your beautiful skin leaves me breathless
your lipstick shines off the morning sun
I lean over for a meaningful kiss
you softly fade to heartbroken dust
This was my favorite part cuz it just had so much meaning and I could feel your emotion. It had such great detail and thought put into it. I could tell. This was an amzing iece and definently one of your best.
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aww ty!
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