can you hear the wedding bells
they are chiming in my ear
the day draws nearer and i
grow scareder
for now i lose my name
the one word i cling to dearly
changes ever so clearly
though scared i may be
of losing my identity
my love for him is still growing
and in my belly it is showing
may be it will
be easier
then what i've been through before
so here i stand
with they wedding bells chiming
it's time for me
to meet him underneath the arch
Please tell me what you think
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brilliant!
wow I think this poem is great!you can feel the emotion really excited, hope it's you that's getting married! can I offer you a tiny bit of advice though? it doesn't affect the actuall poem it is just for presentation as I have only just started doing it myself! when you say 'I' make sure its in capitals for instance id you say: i wanted a cake and i got it you could say I wanted a cake and I got it to me that looks better but thats my opinion! great poem though!
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