ts torture...
I'm so far gone...
my heart feels the pain
of many rainstorms
my state of mind
is waiting for a sign
of reality
my sight is fogged
with hallucination
Devestation
I won't live much longer
with this life form
living on the inside of me
telling me
its going to murder me
You say depression
I say disorientation
I don't know where I am anymore
The moon has called me out
To come true, Say my speech
Be elaquent
I trapped within my own mind
The Bars of Mocking laughter
are what keep me here
Intoxication....
why must I do this to myself
to feel normal
My fear WAS insanity
now I'm living it.
Oh desolation
keep me from harm
save me from the demons
that live with in me
I give myself to you
knowing only one thing
you'll help me
escape
I cried out of panic
Drownd in a pool
of my own
negativity
I need to be
who I can be
But society
defeats me
Crazy. Crazy. CRAZY!
Thats what you are
proof of living
INSANITY!
Bitch...
Whore...
Cunt....
CRAZY!
A contest entry
- Can you make me cry, laugh, dance, or make me sit back and say "wow". by Cherie Elise.
375 points, ended June 19, 2007, 26 entries
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I really am lost to the point of this poem but then again I am impressed with the way you posted this poem. could have done without the cursing in th end but then again this is well within the contest rules. any ways a very nice job all round with this poem and good luck to ya
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Well It worked for me
I am right now sitting and saying "Wow"
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