One kiss to start it all,
one kiss to end it.
One kiss to make me fall,
one kiss to mend it.
One kiss is all I need
to make my life complete.
One kiss to knock me out
and bring me to my knees.
One kiss to show me
how you really feel.
One kiss to hold me
and keep me safe when you are near.
One kiss to bring me closer to your eyes,
just promise you will never leave me...
promesa para siempre...
Author notes
"promesa para siempre" means "promise me forever"
oh and... the title "Que Solo Por Un Beso" means "If Only For One Kiss"
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow. Spanish? I love that language. It made it so beautiful! And you really made me smile, with the love shining through your poem!
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This was a very lovely poem. I liked how you ended it with promesa para siempre. Very nicely done. Thanks for entering my contest and best of luck to you.
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This is a very well written poem. I love the way that it makes me feel. Like I just fell in love all over again. Thanks for sharing. I was so proud of myself when I knew what siempre ment. My husband is a marine and we have a siempre fi sticker on our car that mean "Forever Faithful"
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So sweet! The Spanish language is incredibly romantic; used to say sweet things in Spanish to my boyfriend all the time. The repeated phrase "one kiss" makes this even more powerful. Excellent poem.
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