This is a story of a girl named Jane
who lost everything in her emotional hurricane.
Who stumbled and fell and cried tears of blood,
who watched as the moon refused to be the sun.
Then one day she meet this guy named Jack,
who ran off a cliff and made his head go SMACK!
Because he didn't want to see Jane's dried up tears,
simply because he didn't give a damn since before the first year.
And when stupid Jack died, stupid Jane went to bed,
cut herself on her wrists and cried out to the dead.
And when morning came, she saw Jack by her side,
raped his dead body and wrote on him, "Suicide".
Then Jane saw a light and heard a loud sound...
Turns out Jack had a girlfriend who shot Jane to the ground.
Author notes
haha, I laughed while I was writing this... hey, I was bored...
*hehe, cute bunny... *
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Funny, but a bit demented also. I liked it... Original, as far as I know. I liked the rhythm, and it rhymed beautifully. We all do very starnge and slightly disturbing things when we are bored. Like setting stuff on fire, or writing stuff that scares your friends... Good luck in my contest!
Bunny!!
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AWESOME
nice write.. but i dont know whther it suits any of the options.. however, its a really differnet write.. the rhyme meter flow were very gud, and th twist at the end had me smiling.. thanks for entering, all the best in the contest, keep the pen rolling, lots and lots of love and cheers, shuvi
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