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What Goes Around, Comes Around

Love never dies
it just goes away for a while,
and when you least expect it
you will be in denial.
Once love has hurt you
and torn you inside out,
you won't care if it leaves you
and comes back for another round.
Even if you don't want it,
it will always be there.
Even if you can't see it,
the feeling will be so clear.
Another day of love
brings another day of hurt,
and times when you need to think about
what love is really worth.

Author notes

"If love was a choice,
who would ever choose such
exquisite pain?" - Anna & the King

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  • alexandrathegreat
    August 31, 2007
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    I like the quote it's all about inspiration right? Go where your heart takes you and by the sound of this poem you have a lot of it, thank you for entering.


  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    June 22, 2007

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    I loved the emotion behind this poem...and the philosophy lying within it as well. Truly a great write and thanks for sharing and entering it into my contest.

    ~Raymond~

  • Leaving Today
    June 6, 2007

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    Even if you don't want it,
    it will always be there.
    Even if you can't see it,
    the feeling will be so clear.
    Another day of love
    brings another day of hurt,

    BRILLIANT THOUGHT,loved your poem. Your title caught my eyes!
    what goes around, goes around, goes around,
    comes all the way back around, yeah
    were you influenced by this song of Justin Timberlake?

    all the best for the contest.
    Regards


  • oh willoughby
    June 6, 2007

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    "Once love has hurt you
    and torn you inside out,
    you won't care if it leaves you
    and comes back for another round."

    very deep, very good
    i can soo relate to this
    good job, good luck
    in my contest

    XDax

  • poetic ashleigh
    May 25, 2007

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    Oh my GOd

    This is one of the most true poems, Im sittin here shaking my head to everything you've said i went through that same thing with someone, and just like u said the love is still there and i want it but it mihght hurt me again.

    well,well job done

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