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Almost Caught (Part 1)

Sitting here in works office
alone and wanting you
wishing you were here
I close my eyes and drift...

I'm a million miles away
yet you are here
you touch me
your making me wet
my juices flow desiring you
your look melts me
lips whispering to my soul
placing your hand upon my body
barely touching me
holding me
engulfing me
I want you

Drowned in passion
never let it end
your lips search mine
teasing me with your tounge
stroking my skin, tender
you know my place
you take me there
using your fingers, expertly
giving me so much pleasure

i'm panting

breathless

my pussy aching with lust
you know how i want it
you never disappoint
kissing my neck
driving me wild
you know all my weak spots
using then against me
rubbing your thumb accross my clit
thrusting your fingers deep inside me
first one, two and then three
"Oh God!" i'm gasping

so intense

you know i'm close
can't take much more
you make me explode, I come.....
my back arches 
every muscle tensed
I feel the ache then the release
Feel my juices running from my pussy
down to my thighs
dripping now, satisfied

Looking at you hungrily
you know I want YOU now!

Kneeling before you
your so fucking hard
wrap my lips around you
feel you throb
I feel you ache for me
wrapping my tounge around the tip
circling it, winding my tounge
attempting to force your whole self in my mouth
but I just want to tease
sucking and licking your thighs
I give a little nibble, you gasp
I have you now, i'm in complete control
begin to suck greedily
taking your whole length in my mouth
the more you groan the harder I suck

teasing

nibbling

sucking

licking

intensity... urgency
"Fuck me. I want you to fuck me now!"

lifting me up
onto the desk
lifting my leg up
pushing everything to the floor
plunge inside me - HARD
I cannot keep quiet
you are not gentle now
firm, harsh and thrusting hard
so much pleasure
so turned on
Sex - urgent and relentless
FUCK!

I bolt awake, come too
someone is coming
you're not here
i'm confused
looking down my fingers deep inside me
I blush

Almost caught

I'm smiling a satisfied smile

Almost caught

To be continued........




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  • Riftkin gold member
    September 6, 2007

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    Oh yes baby you know how to set the mood for more more more

    and this is so hot hot hot hot

    Riftkin


  • ms-cuddles silver member
    August 8, 2007

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    LOL this is so hot. It reminds me of my poem "our hands" What's a girl to do when we're ready and they're not around....lmao Hot write, good luck in the contest. Hugs~ Cuddles


  • cali951
    August 8, 2007
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    Well I have read a lot of great poems and I wanted the finalist pick the winners.....now I'm not saying I want you to read every finalist but if you could read some poems and let me know if you think you should win let me know also thansk


  • Jai Guru Deva
    June 15, 2007
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    Wow...this was scintilating! i love it


  • cali951
    June 13, 2007

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    Wow this was a really good poem you made it seem to me so real as if i was jsut watching someone doing it like that because of your wording good job


  • NickelleteXninja
    June 3, 2007

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    oh wowza1 I'm semi afraid to add this to the preliminary! lol... intense. ,y jaw dropped and I was like oh wow1

    the tittle gave me no idea to what was to be coming...hahha

    wow...
    awseome write. amazing. from start to finish

    sadly I m ust say imagery! damn to think of that at three in the morning! haha well done im in awe

    thanks for entering


  • scullion
    May 27, 2007

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    babi its amazing im so proud of you sophies definatly awake i love the extra detail youve added i cant wait until part two beautiful theres nothing you cant all my love your boyfriend scullion


  • Water Color Sky
    May 26, 2007

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    Great write! I love how this peice tells a story! Almost caught! Great theme to work with! Great job! Can't wait for part two!
    -Ashley =]


  • shadow-of-the-sun
    May 26, 2007

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    lol, just like i thought, you helped me pitch another tent i love reading your stuff, its so imaginative and blunt, which is just how i like my erotica now i must go and take care of this tent and then sleep awesome work babe, much love xxx


  • moment liver
    May 25, 2007
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    haha, ok, thought this was great. almost caught, that's a good one. write on


    • babi
      May 26, 2007
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      hi thanks for the comment, i decided that it wasn't anywhere near graphic enough so i have added some more lines around the juicey action bits, feel free to be critical and tell me what you think if you so wish. Thanks again for the comment much appreciated xxx babi


      • moment liver
        May 26, 2007

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        well, when I read I see it as extremely striking, cuz your words are so vague and honest, don't worry, it's a good thing.lol I guess I just love the concept "almost caught". write on

        See you around the deep end
        moment liver

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