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Mr. rIGHT

I don't know how to say it,
I don't know how to tell you how I know it.
All I know is that i do know it
And it is so honest and true.
He walked into my life as just another friend,
One that i wouldn't see next year because he would be gone.
But now he is more then that to me,
He is now my Mr. Right.

Every day he reminds me that he love me,

Now the school year is almost done and he will be gone.

But we are going to fight to keep this,

Me & Mr. Right will not give up so easily.

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  • broken-colours
    May 25, 2007

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    Sorry, hun, but this was a bit repetitive. You could've gone deeper with this, as well. I know that love is sweet and magical; you definitely could've showed it more with this poem.