I hail from the shadows
But speak of the light
Morbid the forces
Hosting my night
My pen runs before me
Blazing my trail
I follow behind it
Escaping my hell
Simply put, I write simple fare
Treasuring the pleasure
Explored and found
A release beyond measure
Enter my world
You may come as you are
But don't expect complexities
I haven't come quite that far
In a list
A contest entry
- Rounds Contest - Round 1 - An introduction ... by imgone.
450 points, ended June 21, 2007, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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thought provoking....
I hail from the shadows
But speak of the light
Morbid the forces
Hosting my night
My pen runs before me
Blazing my trail
I follow behind it
Escaping my hell
These two stanzas are my favorite in this elegant piece.
Knight70
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I'm glad you like this one, seeing as how it's kind of personal
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I really enjoyed this write. Very well written "traces of me"...
Lady Dragonwyck
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Thank you so much. A nice review to read. lol
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Master Piece
Wow this is deep you talent is amazing. I love this stances. There awesome.
(LISA)
"My pen runs before me
Blazing my trail
I follow behind it
Escaping my hell
Enter my world
You may come as you are
But don't expect complexities
I haven't come quite that far"
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Wow
This is indeed a great review for moi. And a great compliment as well. Wow, thanks so much. lol
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I like this it is awesome. I love the way your poem flows. you are really good and keep sharing that talent with us hun.
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Thanks so much. I appreciate your opinion on this one.
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i like the flow again pat .. please dont get tooooo complex and freeze me out..just a little insightful intelligence is enough ....hugs ..peter
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Peter you are just too funny, really, love it in you though.
lol
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oh wow
This is elegant, simple, beautiful, and very poised. It's a wonderful piece, what else can I say? Lovely.
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Thank you so much, this is so very kind of you.
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The simplicity of this poem is so beautiful but has so much depth. I loved every stanza of this especially the last stanza. Truly outstanding.
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Thank you, for this most flattering of reviews. I am grateful for it. lol
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wow..simplicity is truly a beuty to behold with...I love the second stanza...I think it holds true for all poets and writers out there...and actually I entered your world already...thank you for welcoming me and showing me a lot of beautiful poems...
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TY hahaha
I hope you enjoyed your stay lol thanks for this review.
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I loved:
"But don't expect complexities
I haven't come quite that far"
Good luck
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Thanks for this elegant comment.
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ah i have said many times that poetry does not need to be so complex, simplicity is just as good as complexity. and sometimes even shines more so. a good poem my other id in here is called complex simplicity though i do not go in there much and have no poems posted there
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TY
It must be feeling neglected then..
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I like this simple little piece, What poetry means to you, a glimpse of your inner self. Well done and good luck in the contest. Val
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Why
Thank you so much.
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I enjoyed this short write, I do not like complexities either. Great work
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Wow
Thanks for relating and reviewing, I appreciate.
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simple and eloquent with a rocking rhythm that you always have ...well done
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As Previously Stated
You are so kind, thank you. This review is in my top ten,
your first three words are the title to one of my most favorite poems written to date.
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