The barcode on my face
says i am made
of
porcelain
yet-
i don't feel
as real as that.
Author notes
i have a new foundation the colour is "porcelain"
[and you thought i was being deep right ? ]
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Please tell me what you think
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In fact, I still think you were being deep. This is a nice poem. I enjoy simplicity when it is dealt with well.
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Lol, nice joke
Anyhoo, this is really good. The ending line really wrapped everything up yet hit hard. The icture fits perfectly. I actually used to collect porcelain dolls. I always had to keep them in my closet 'cause they scared me
Great write dear, love you
Jeanette*~
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hehe i still do collect them =] i have lots all along a shelf on my wall =]
lots of people find them scary, i dont get it really, i think they're beautiful x -
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I think they're beautiful too, it's just the eyes are what gets to me, and I guess seeing something that looks so perfect... <3
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I still think this is deep. We'll just say that the makeup inspired you
I used to do that too... I'd write poems inspired by urban decay makeup. it was fun 
I love you always ♥
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This is great. And my foundation is called Sand. How unpoetic is that?
It is deep, and its fucking awesom. I love it.
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it could be poetic... coz sand is a covering, but the tears are the tide... and it's washing the pretty pretence away...and sand makes glass and glass is sharp...
there's something in that somewhere...
lol.
<3 thanks sweetie.
love yoo xxxx
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Haha;; con I love this, even though it's about your make up.
you're amaze ♥
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lol... it was so random...
urgh im so bored
love you x
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lol it is kinda deeper than that aswell... i just thought i'd explain the inspiration lol =]
its actually not that pale suprisingly... it's just a sort of pale browny-pinkish colour... lol
Maybeline matte mouse = the best foundation Ever though. fact.
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Chh.
I finally was ready to leave a deep comment too
&& you're like "ha no, I'm not being deep."
I want foundation the colour of porcelain.
I'm as white a porcelain anyways. lol.
<3
Love ya!
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i really like this. and i love the way you just plainly say that in your author notes.
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Thanks sweetie. <3
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Don't add anymore....this is perfect.
I have that foundation
Anyway...my god I get this. So badly.
And it is finished.....in my opinion.
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i love this.
&& i love what inspired it.
talk about creativity.
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*rolls eyes* Yes, I thought this was rather deep, until I read your author's notes. Ruin the feel of it, why don't you? =P Just kidding. I still think this is thought-provoking, despite your side-note.
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haha it's deep as well i do mean more than that
just thought i'd put that in to explain heh
it's nice to dash people's hopes
Glad you liked thanks for comment <3 x
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