i am letting go and forgiving you
i was 5 years old but still its time to forgive
i have held this grudge and anger toward you since then
but now its time i let go
holding on to this anger and grudge is doing me no good
its only causing me pain
i have finally decided to forgive you for what you did
you did not ruin my life i did
i let what happen linger and envelope me in the anger
its not helathy and its time i have to let go
i am graduating from highschool this year and its been 13 years
i forgive you for what happened
neathier one of us need this pain and anger
we are adults and need to forgive and forget
this is my way of saying i forgive you
no more will i hold a grudge and anger i forgive you
Author notes
i choice option 3
A contest entry
- The hurt inside by ExpectingMommy18.
600 points, ended May 25, 2007, 27 entries
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Comments
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really great emotion in this, really sad, makes me wonder what happened, but in the end it doesn't matter, cos it's all forgiven and things will get better
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this was absolutly wonderful the poem itself was very sad but how somebody did something to you and your forgiving them is very strong...thank you for entering....please put the option you chose...good luck
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Oh dear this piece hurts. You have a gift for reaching in to my chest and ripping my heart out. Well penned verse here. You are right, forgiveness heals pain.
Love,
Amera
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