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Simple Words

Simple words can mean so much
when they come from your beloved lips
interested in every word
holding you with every syllable
wanting it to never end
i don't want to let go
of this...never...

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  • -MrsWonka-
    May 26, 2007
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    aww bless ya. young love XD


  • Blueskywonder
    May 26, 2007

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    This is a touching piece of poetry expressing deeply your longing... passion for those who inspire... comfort you. This is lovely karen... it's nice to see the beauty in you
    Well done Karen


    • writhing infection
      May 29, 2007
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      i am surprised i had any left considering how much dark poetry i write lol!!! thanks for the comment!!!