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[ You are more fair, ]

You are more fair,
then the angels above.
You are more beautiful,
then the Garden of Eden.
You are more lovely,
then the mother nature itself.
Your eyes are like diamonds,
shinning with sincerity and honesty.
All eyes gaze upon you,
amaze by your beauty.
Men adore you,
women envy you.
There is no mask,
hiding your true-self.
You are the mistress of my passion,
My most valuable treasure.

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  • Losing Hope
    May 28, 2007

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    Aw, wow.
    I love it.
    It's beautiful.
    Especially this part:

    Your eyes are like diamonds,
    shinning with sincerity and honesty.

    It's so gorgeous =]
    Great write



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