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Once In a Battle

Once in a battle
Fought with sticks
God lost to
Dracula's tricks.

25,Oct,1987*

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Evil all around, God's ain't doing a thing!!!

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  • shirk
    June 1, 2007
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    I think this is too short to convey a message. I mean...it's nice...I like your authors box more than the poem, because you actually say something there. It's unclear in your poem, and the background just...doesn't fit at all.

    Thanks for the entry though, and keep writing.