I sit here alone
a dark cloud above above my head
insecurities haunting me
as I try to go to bed.
I intend to get some sleep
because I know that you are true
but cant seem to clear my head
of the mistrust I feel for you.
Before I can close my eyes
I want to know you're here
I need to know your next to me
to chase away my fears.
Please tell me what you think
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Groovy Write Girl! Insecurities do suck! I really like the line " Before I can close my eyes, I want to know you're here" that sounds safe and warm!
Namaste'
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good job!
this is really good... I like the flow and rythm... did I spell that right? omg, I'm dyslexic... so, sorry if I spelled it wrong... I do the same thing at work, I end up having to have the customers read the total and the change to me from the other side... lmao... ok, enough of my dang rambling... I know this feeling... it sucks... at least you got these feelings out on paper! good job! keep it up!!!!!
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Letting go of our own pain is the hardest part. Men go through this too, even if they don't admit it.
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yer we all have insecurities, and as hard as we try to overcome them and forget about them, they will always be there. I like the way u have written this. Trust is hard to earn when you lose it. Good work sis!
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Hey this is really really good but sounds like I have heard most of them words befor LOL a few times very well put together I like
Adam
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