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The Art of Silliness

Still,

he was so still

inside of me

yet, I could feel

him growing

expanding

becoming

a part of me

quietly..

 

by Lane copied without permission - sue me 

 

*************************** 

 

 

Yeah

 

you killed him

 

 

cooked him

 

 

and ate him

 

 

what did you expect?

 

 

It's just gas...

Author notes

I should apologize to Lane because I actually plagiarized this poem a couple weeks before she wrote it.

2nd entry in Bunny Whores wars

**No Bunnies were killed in the making of this silliness.

No need to point out I'm a judge and shouldn't be allowed to win. Look at the crap I wrote. Like I said... no need.

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    June 7, 2007
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    This is

    Succinctly titled for sure. You are so funny. lol


  • roses on fire
    May 26, 2007

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    yoyoyo this one was my pick and me and izzy LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    you rock this one was my pick and it was wonderful!!!!!!!!!!! "you are a great writer!!!!" isabel says!!!!!!!!!!!!

    once again you get phree lovely bunnies!!!!!!!!!!


  • Dalaney gold member
    May 25, 2007

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    ha ha ha ha ha...I'm dyin' here.  Oh, geez, pass the Kleenex...Someone open a window....What a nut.


  • Amera gold member
    May 25, 2007

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    You nut! You plagiarized this poem a couple weeks before she wrote it! That's classic! Good luck in the contest you already lost as a co-judge but I won't DQ you. Here are the bunny war trophys.

    Love,
    Amera


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    May 25, 2007

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    I had to click and see what daftness you were up too! Still as silly as ever huh? But we wouldn't have you any other way! Laura


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    May 25, 2007
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    I thinketh thee hath goneth outeh uponeth a limbeth
    Lunaeth


  • cheaphotelsign
    May 25, 2007

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    now that was hilarious. i have jolly-tears after reading this. BAAAHAHAHA! (gas makes great humor- it's the spice of life)

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