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A flower bloomed
in silence...

Silence,
What a beautiful choice
To choose to bloom in a room
undisturbed by noise,
Finding voice in the flowers
Empowered
but never knew that a pain
could be shed in showers
Never knew that a sound
could be found in pain
Never drowned in the sound of rain

For romance through the eyes of lips
passion comes from the dance
In the silent kiss

...Heralding a vision of beauty

Author notes

This was a collaberation with the poem "Beautiful Silence" http://allpoetry.com/poem/3002042 . I thought I'd go a different way with the same concept rather that react in form. I really liked the poem and loved the activity. great idea for a contest.

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  • Dalaney gold member
    May 25, 2007

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    Without a doubt...I am stunned by this beautiful
    writing. I'm going to cry and it's all Amera's
    fault.... Love, Lane


  • Amera gold member
    May 25, 2007

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    This is a good representation of her poem, I agree. Thanks so much for entering and good luck in the contest.

    Love,
    Amera

    3 bunnies, she's the bunny whore, not me.