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Senseless Society

People, let differences save us from self annihalation. The intolerence and arrogance of a mindset built on pride resting snugly on boastful words of violence obtained only through the blind judgements made on another. The judgement on skin and looks as opposed to character and thought. Barbaric. A supposed evolution of a human with such a revolting thought process created from morbid virtues developed through ones own malicious intent. A disease spreading across the mindwaves of the weak in the world, catagorizing becomes so much easier then entertaining the factor of independent judgement. Loss of love, hate breaths on the corpses and wrecks the world of all that was once held dear. Tolerance, Understanding, Peace, all fade into the abyss as they are swept away by the sea of savagery and waves of immorality created for the sole purpose of disorder brought on by its followers. A crime is committed. Who takes the blame? The different,the individual just as innocent as you and I. Why? Color, Appearence, Judgement, A factor of todays law and order in more places than one. Sense, the ability to think and think differently,to accept others. The ability to awaken and realize it's not Us Vs. Them. To kill a notion and proclaim a fact, we are what we chose to be. Killing the Senseless Society.

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  • blackening-soul
    July 18, 2007

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    I love your choice of words. They're so strong and full of emotion. I like the last two lines. They make this write complete. Very good job...keep writing.


    • JoeVillegas
      July 18, 2007
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      Thank You

      All You Say Really Means Alot To Me, It's Good To Know People Are So In Touch And Care So Greatly About The Ever Changing World Around Them.